[Solved] Scoring a Sample Shorpy Photograph Analysis

Assignment Prompt & Instructions

This is a sample of the Shorpy Photograph Analysis, written for the same assignment that you have due on **Monday, July 13th**. Please read this es-say and score it using the rubric that follows it. (I change the student names on all the sample es-says to those of distant ancestors of mine.)

Tell me shortly why you graded how you did so I'm able to answer comments from professor

**Grading and Revising Sheet for Shorpy Photo Analysis, ENGL 1302      __ / 50**

____ 3 pts.  Distinctive title, with some pre-thesis “What?” and, ideally, “So what?”, too.

____ 2 pts.  APA format on the title page and pa-per headings

____6 pts.  Active voice with transitive verbs (SVO) only in every clause of each paragraph’s

                   first sentence

____3 pts.  **Bolded** thesis in the first paragraph

____8 pts.  Divisible, debatable, thesis with engaging “motivating move” claim easily seen in

**bolded** thesis

____3 pts.  “Who, what, where, when, and why” –level introduction

____4 pts.  Historical context with connections to the photo

____3 pts.  Analysis of the photo – what makes it memorable aside from its historical value?

____3 pts.  APA in-text citation

____7 pts.  Grammar, sentence structure, punctuation

____2 pts.  APA reference list

____3 pts.  Effective transitions, “known-new” contracts, between sentences and paragraphs

____3 pts.  Conclusion consistent with the thesis

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